OSSU! So we finally finished five rounds, and all of you are doing great so far! However, the upcoming challenges will get harder and harder, so step up your game! ONTO THE RESULTS!!
Letter from the CEO
"Congrats on your hard work during the After Rain Runway! Nijino Koibito was very pleased with everyone's results, and he personally chose not one, but the top 3 designers with their design! Open the envelope, one by one."
TOP 1:
CHRISMH!!
Piece 1 | Piece 2 | Piece 3 | Piece 4 |
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Starry Chic Accessory |
Piece 1 | Piece 2 | Piece 3 | Piece 4 |
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Idol Time Harp Coco Hair Accessory |
TOP 2:
AMYPOP8!!
Piece 1 | Piece 2 | Piece 3 | Piece 4 |
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Merry-Go-Round Flower Hair Accessory |
Piece 1 | Piece 2 | Piece 3 | Piece 4 |
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Violet Jewel Mic Accessory |
AND
WINXENIA!!
Piece 1 | Piece 2 | Piece 3 | Piece 4 |
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Bijou Chiffon Emerald Accessory |
Piece 1 | Piece 2 | Piece 3 | Piece 4 |
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Colourful Retro Blue Accessory |
TOP 3:
CFMISAKI!!
Piece 1 | Piece 2 | Piece 3 | Piece 4 |
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RJ Starter Jewelry Hair Accessory |
Piece 1 | Piece 2 | Piece 3 | Piece 4 |
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Holic Moon Hair Accessory |
REVIEW + SCORES
(Y'all know the drill!)
Ai Kurosu
PENALTY: Didn’t follow the color combination
- Overall Score: (7+6=13)
- Ivanly's Comment:(Please make sure you preview your entries before posting to avoid editing) It’s a great coord, but unfortunately your first coord didn’t follow the color order since your skirt is definitely not indigo. I do love how you kept the frills going for both the tops and the accessory though!
I prefer your second coord over your first one. It follows all the rules, and the black in your tops makes the red look more vibrant. Sadly, it overpowers your other coord pieces, especially the light yellow shoes. - NBR's Comment: N/A
Amypop
- Overall Score: 8+8=16
- Ivanly’s Comment: Your first coord looks very unbalanced with the pastel yellows and greens suddenly changing to a bold and dark blue and indigo. It probably would’ve worked out better if you’d chosen a skirt that was more to the sky-blue side of the spectrum, since the blue on the skirt looks very similar to the indigo on your shoes and makes the coord look even more unbalanced. Your second coord is very beautiful! Most of the pieces are simple, but they still work together very well. I definitely wouldn’t mind wearing this even though the colours on all the pieces are different :)
- NBR’s Comment: I like how you went for a school theme in your first Coord, but the thing that bothered me was the mix of pastel and dark colours. The Top looked to pale and bright for the other pieces, but the yellow accents managed to help balance the Coord out. For the second Coord, I absolutely love how regal it looks, and you were true to the name you gave it!
Chrismh
- Overall Score: 8+9=17
- Ivanly’s Comment: Your first coord seems a little unbalanced. There’s a lot of decorations on your accessory and tops, so it left a dull feeling when I saw that your skirt and shoes looked a little plain. I love how your second coord looks! It’s much more balanced in terms of the decorations, and while the stockings for your shoes piece is a little dull it works out very well! Also love the tiny hearts on your tops, skirt and shoes it makes the coord look a little more cohesive despite all the different colours on every piece.
- NBR’s Comment: I actually like your first Coord. The only thing I didn’t like was the Shoes piece, as it looks underwhelming, dull, and is lacking “liveliness” compared to the rest of the pieces. For your second Coord, it’s very well picked as I could see each piece connect with each other. What I really appreciate is that there I can see a heart-like jewel or shape present in almost every piece!
CFMisaki
PENALTY: Used a Dress piece
- Overall Score: 7+8 =15
- Ivanly’s Comment: It’s such a shame you used a one-piece for your first coord, I think it would’ve looked amazing if that wasn’t against the rules xD Other than that, I’m a little sceptical on the black parts of your shoes, they don’t really fit the coord but it’s a good effort! Your second coord is very cute! At first glance I wasn’t very attracted to it, but after looking closer I could see the nice points of it! Still, maybe if you’d chosen something that didn’t have a baseball glove or maybe some shoes that looked a little more sporty it would’ve been better.
- NBR’s Comment: Despite the violation, your Coord looked good, but it wasn’t as great as I would say. I would agree with Ivanly with the black parts on the Shoes piece as it isn’t present in the other pieces, but I like how it gives off this fancy look. For the second Coord, I like how each piece has yellow present as its accent. I was kinda taken aback when I saw your Shoes piece, since it doesn’t fit with the overall style of the Coord.
Gogofun9999
PENALTY: Didn’t follow the colour order, used a dress
- Overall Score: 6+5=11
- Ivanly's Comment: I’m afraid you didn’t follow the colour order correctly for your first coord. It goes red, orange THEN yellow. Other than the colour order error, it’s a pretty nice coord overall. However, I feel like the green on your shoes is a little too bright compared to the rest of your coord pieces.
You also used a dress, which we stated was not allowed. I also feel as though the style of the dress you chose doesn’t really fit the boots you chose. Also, since you didn’t put the accessory first like we asked, you got the colour order wrong again. I’m also not sure if we’d consider your accessory violet, it would probably be more of a pink. - NBR's Comment: NA
LoliRose
- Overall Score: 7+7=14
- Ivanly’s Comment: Your indigo and purple coord pieces look too similar in colour, which makes it look unbalanced. I’m also not a big fan of the long skirt followed by tall boots combination.
Your second one is slightly better. However, I don’t really like how it went from these light oranges, yellows and greens to suddenly a very bold blue. I probably would suggest a shoe piece that was closer to a light or sky blue to balance out the coord pieces. - NBR’s Comment: What I actually like about your Coords is that how simple they look, but there were pieces that didn’t go well with each other.
WinXenia
PENALTY: Didn’t use a coord from the random page button
- Overall Score: 8+8=16
- Ivanly's Comment: Sadly, since you lacked a coord from the “Random Page” button (perhaps you forgot to write it in your entry?) we had to take off a point.
The coords themselves look very nice though! The skirt in your first coord is one of my personal favourite pieces, and you paired it well with other coord pieces despite them being totally different colours.
Same thing with your second coord. It goes very well together and the little bit of green on your coord make it go even better with the shoes since they have similar shades of green. My only complaint would probably be the red being too bold in comparison to your other coord pieces xD - NBR's Comment: NA
Williukea
PENALTY: Didn’t follow the colour order
- Overall Score: 7+5=12
- Ivanly's Comment: Unfortunately, the skirt in your first coord is not counted as indigo, because we stated it has to the MAIN colour. I also think your shoes look a little plain and gets overpowered by the rest of the coord.
Your second coord looks a little nicer. However, I would’ve liked the colours to be a little more balanced in terms of brightness/darkness, since your accessory and tops are light, while your bottoms and shoes are dark, which makes it look like you accidentally slapped 2 halves of 2 different coords together. - NBR's Comment: NA
BONUS!!!
Apparently, we have an unregistered user who joined in. But we decided to score their entry as well!
Rainbow1234567891 (Boy that's a lot of numbers! XD)
- Overall Score: 8+8=16
- Ivanly's Comment: Your first coord is amazing! The black in the bottoms and shoes adds a nice touch to the rainbow colours, not to mention that they match together quite well! That’s why I would probably suggest that if you wanted to keep the black, maybe choose a top which has a little bit of black too. That definitely would’ve made the coord a lot better in my opinion.
Your second coord is a little chaotic. The lack of a dark colour in your shoes gives the coord a bland finish. Also, since your bottoms come from a recolour of the coord your tops is front, it made it seem less creative. - NBR's Comment: I absolutely love, love, LOVE your first Coord!! It's very vibrant, and I can see that there's a connection with each piece in terms of pattern and details. Although I would have to agree with Ivanly on your second Coord; two pieces are basically recolours of each other, which I consider to be a lazy and safe idea. But other than that, great job!
AND THAT'S IT!!!! OMG I DID IT!! T^T